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Movie World by Auryn

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Queensland what a fun place! There is Movie World, Wet ’n’ Wild, Sea World and Surfers Paradise. You would think I would pick Paris or India, but I’m here to tell you all about Movie World. There is so much stuff to do; where should I start? All right, I got it…I hope you are not afraid of heights! 

My name is Auryn.  First, how would I get there? I don’t suggest driving, it takes 18 and a half hours! Surprising, isn’t it? You would have to drive over 1,800 kilometres. If you take a plane it takes about 2 hours and 18 minutes. 

What would I do first? I would ride the Scooby-Doo roller coaster (because I’ve been there already). It goes 17 metres high. There’s an elevator that takes you up, and then you see a video. Then you drop backwards. After that, you turn forwards and then you feel like you’re going to fall off when you reach 17 metres high.  

Then I would ride the Road Runner roller coaster, it goes over the shed. Then I would ride the Wild West roller coaster, and then I would ride a Superhero roller coaster down in the alley near the Batwing. I forgot its name, but it is a 3D ride. There are little lasers shooters, and you must save the superheroes and citizens by shooting the giant starfish. 

There is a kids’ undercover area with little cars and kids outside area with rides even, water rides! It is so much fun! So, if you have little kids, you can take them there. 

If you’re an adult, go on the Green Lantern or Superman ride. The Green Lantern is near that 3D roller coaster I mentioned earlier.

Siblings by Josh

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How would you like to be lonely? If you have no one to play with at school, you can play with your siblings. 

If you are always lonely you should totally get a Sibling and have fun. You will get the best fun if they play Fornite with you every single day? 

If you have siblings, you should never worry about being lonely. Get off the internet and play with your brother and sister?  

There’s always someone there for you when you really need it like when you get blamed for things, but you did not do it. They can tell the teacher the truth. 

I hope I have convinced you that having a sibling is better than being an only child. 

Siblings by Dylan

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Imagine you’re trying to watch tv, and all you can here is your little brother crying. Man, I wish I was an only child!   

Firstly, if you are an only child, there is no one to tease you, take your things and fight with you. You can play what you want without being disturbed. 

Secondly, you don’t get blamed for things you didn’t do.  My brother smashed the PlayStation controller and blamed me. 

Thirdly, you get more money spent on you and you can also go to more places.  I want to go to Queensland, but Mum said, ‘Sorry we don’t have enough money.’ I wish I was an only child then my parents may be able to afford to take me.  

“Shush! I’m trying to listen to music!” My brother is so annoying! I definitely wish I was an only child!    

Siblings by Elliott

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Have you ever thought about what it would be like to have siblings? Well, I’m here today to convince you that it’s better to be an only child. 

Being an only child means that you don’t have to wait your turn to play with your toys. Imagine being able to play video games in peace without having to wait your turn. You can play a video game without Mum saying 

“Dinner time, children! When you are finished eating, your brother is back on the Xbox! 

You don’t have to deal with fighting with your brother/sister when you don’t have any siblings, I’ve talked to people who have siblings. They say that they often deal with fights with their older sibling and it’s a nightmare! 

Being an only child means that your parents will be able to afford expensive vacations. It would’ve cost a lot more for 4 people. You’d be going through bankruptcy on the 1st day of the trip! 

Being an only child means that your parents will spend more money on you such as buying new video games, action figures. If you had siblings, your parents would never get less of you want.  

I’ve never wanted siblings because a lot of people say that having a 3yo brother who’s constantly begging you to play with them when you just got home from school  is just IRRITATING! 

Can you just imagine the experience of not being disturbed by your brother/sister who’s constantly changing the channel when your favourite show is on? Then you go to your room and your other sibling is blasting their favourite song at maximum volume! I’m an only child, so I have any peace and quiet coming home from school. 

According to scientific studies, being an only child means that you will have a brighter future and your self-confidence will increase!